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高考英语写作讲练

如何进行图画式作文的写作?

图画式作文就是通过图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文,包括叙述一个故事,或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画式作文就内容而言,可以写观察到的内容,也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容;就表达方式而言,可以单纯地理解、说明,也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。

写好图画式作文的要求是:认真审图,确立主题,提炼要点,展开联想或发表感想,变点为句,连句成篇。要达到这些要求,我们就必须认真审图,善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图(表)中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点;要围绕主题展开合理的想象,切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想。

如何写好这种类型的书面表达,结合实例做些具体的指导。

 

下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情。请根据下面6幅图,用英语写一篇题为An Accident的短文。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

短文必须包括以下内容:

1.图中讲述了一个什么故事?

2.女孩的言行说明了什么问题?

3.你对此事有什么感想?

注意:1.对于图中所发生的事情可以适当发挥想象,增加有关细节,但必须合理;

2.词数:150左右(标题已经给出不计入总词数)。

An Accident

 

 

   审题:

写作要点?

1有一天,我和父亲在湖边散步;

2一个女孩骑自行车路过(结合后面的图中所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快)。

3听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音;

4转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎,在喊“救命啊!”。

5我和父亲快步跑过去把女孩拉上岸。

    6我和父亲把女孩掉湖里自行车也弄上了岸。

7根据图中“我”头脑中的问号,可以推断“我”感到非常困惑。为什么?结合常识“得到了别人的帮助,理应表示感谢”。再根据图中“女孩已经骑车离去”可以推断女孩连声“谢谢”恐怕都没有说。

8围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想

①对自己:为什么要帮助别人?

    帮助别人是美德,不是图别人的感谢;

②对女孩的无礼进行评论:

许多年轻人不懂礼貌,这对建设和谐社会非常有害。

③自我劝慰

   比起帮了别人反成被告的人来说,我们还算幸运。毕竟我们没有被人冤枉。

遣词造句:

One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake .

A girl rode past at a very high speed.

We heard a frightened scream.

There was a big noise of something dropping into the water.

Something dropped into the water, making a big noise.

We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake.

The girl was crying for help.

We heard the girl crying for help.

Dad and I ran as possible as quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water.

Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and saved her.

We also managed to get her bike which fell into the lake. 

We were also able to pull her bike out of the water.

The girl rode away even without sayingThanks.

I had thought the girl would say Thank youto us before she left, but she said nothing and rode away.

I felt quite puzzled at her behavior.

I felt quite disappointed at her impoliteness.

Helping others is the traditional virtue.

We don’t help others for “Thanks” .

We don’t help others because they thank us.

Many young people don’t know how to be polite .

Many people don’t know what being polite means.

It does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society .

It is very harmful to constructing Harmonious Society .

Compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, How lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others.

I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents. How lucky we were! After all, we escaped being included in such stories.

 

【参考范文】一

One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike out of water. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without sayingThanks. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.

As far as I am concerned, helping others is the traditional virtue. We don’t help others for “Thanks”, but nowadays, many young people don’t know how to be polite, which does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society. However, compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, I felt how lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others.

【参考范文】二

One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike out of the water. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without sayingThanks. I felt quite disappointed at her behavior.

We don’t help others forThanks, but nowadays many young people don’t know to be polite. What a pity it is for our society and for our civilization! At the same time, I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents. How lucky we were! After all, we escaped being included in such stories.

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以下四辐图所反映的是你上周六在你家附近的公园里的一条湖里救起了一名落水儿童的经过。请根据图画所反映的内容,写一篇英文周记,叙述事情发生的全过程并简要谈谈你的感受(至少两点)。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

注意:

       1.周记的开头已为写好(不计入总词数);

       2.词数:150左右。

3. 参考词汇:pavilion(公园、花园中的)亭子

It was sunny last Saturday. At about noon I went to the park near my home to spend my weekend as usual.

 

 

I was enjoying my reading in a pavilion near a lake when suddenly I heard someone crying for help. I jumped up to see what was happening and was shocked by the scene. In the distance a little kid was seen struggling in the water, while many people standing by the lake took no measures to help the kid. Believe it or not, I even heard some persons say that it was none of their business and it was freezing cold after all. Without hesitation, I pushed through the crowd, rushing to the river as I took off my coat and jumped into the water quickly. Cold as the water was, I managed to reach him and held him back to the bank. To my relief, the kid was saved in time.

I was proud what I had done that day. I hope everyone can give a hand when others are in trouble. Only in this way can we build a harmonious society.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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